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As developing the mordern society, many kinds of things have been changing that include the food that we can eat everyday.
Especially Small family became a usual form thesedays and most women are working at company rather than before.
So It is hard to make home made food and to enjoy the enough time as people are so busy these days.
These are the main reasons that people are turning to the fast food.
Of course, as getting increase these life style there are way more various forms of the convenient food to cook and eat.
It makes you to live the convenient life but to give unhealthy body on the contrary. And you would be get used to the artificial taste as much as you eat ready meals.
So eventually, advantages aren't as much as disadvantages and you should recognize the warning that the fast food would give both of sweetness and bitterness.
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Teacher Travis.
As developing the mordern society, many kinds of things have been changing that include the food that we can eat everyday.
>>As the modern society is being developed, many things have been changing that include the food that we can eat everyday.
Especially Small family became a usual form thesedays and most women are working at company rather than before.
>>Especially small family became usual these days and most women are working now at company rather than before.
So It is hard to make home made food and to enjoy the enough time as people are so busy these days.
>>So it\'s hard to make food at home and enjoy enough time as people are so busy these days.
These are the main reasons that people are turning to the fast food.
>>These are the main reason why people are turning to fast food.
Of course, as getting increase these life style there are way more various forms of the convenient food to cook and eat.
>>As our life style is increasing there are more ways form of convenient food to cook and eat.
It makes you to live the convenient life but to give unhealthy body on the contrary. And you would be get used to the artificial taste as much as you eat ready meals.
>>It makes you live to convenient life but to give unhealty body on contrary. And you would get used to artificial taste as much as you eat ready meals.
So eventually, advantages aren\'t as much as disadvantages and you should recognize the warning that the fast food would give both of sweetness and bitterness
>>Correct
>>As the modern society is being developed, many things have been changing that include the food that we can eat everyday.
Especially Small family became a usual form thesedays and most women are working at company rather than before.
>>Especially small family became usual these days and most women are working now at company rather than before.
So It is hard to make home made food and to enjoy the enough time as people are so busy these days.
>>So it\'s hard to make food at home and enjoy enough time as people are so busy these days.
These are the main reasons that people are turning to the fast food.
>>These are the main reason why people are turning to fast food.
Of course, as getting increase these life style there are way more various forms of the convenient food to cook and eat.
>>As our life style is increasing there are more ways form of convenient food to cook and eat.
It makes you to live the convenient life but to give unhealthy body on the contrary. And you would be get used to the artificial taste as much as you eat ready meals.
>>It makes you live to convenient life but to give unhealty body on contrary. And you would get used to artificial taste as much as you eat ready meals.
So eventually, advantages aren\'t as much as disadvantages and you should recognize the warning that the fast food would give both of sweetness and bitterness
>>Correct
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