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I totally agree with you, Sir~
We need to consider a lot of factors in order to solve this problem.
However, I think that prevention is definitely better than cure.
We would not be debating on the best issue had we known the proper way to solve this issue.
See you on Wednesday!
While in prison, thieves might spend time mulling over how to commit theft without detection after being released.
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If the imprisonment period is longer and longer, it would be more difficult for released prisoners to adapt themselves to our society
because the society\'s changes tend to be so speedy.
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According to some study, the number of the mentally ill in prison are much more than those in psychiatric hospitals.
>> According to some study, the number of the mentally ill in prison is much more than those in psychiatric hospitals.
In some respects, prisons are almost the same as big mental hospitals.
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There were not a few homeless people who deliberately committed theft to go to jail because they needed shelters and food in the
severely cold winter season.
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Solving the crime problem is never simple and easy, even though we invest tons of money to the issue.
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I\'ve heard that a big church in Seoul has been running a prison after being commissioned from the government.
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The church seems to have given a lot of opportunity for prisoners, such as psychological treatments, religious approaching methods, and the like.
>>The church seems to have given a lot of opportunities for prisoners, such as psychological treatments, religious approaching methods, and the like.
I\'d like to send them a big hand over the new attempt to solve the crime problem.
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