homework
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Who is your favorite teacher in school? Why is she your favorite?
My favorite teacher is a class teacher.
Because,she have a lot of laugh like as me.
And ,she give us to many exciting activity like cooking, birthday party.
So, I like a class teacher so much.
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Who is your favorite teacher in school? Why is she your favorite?
My favorite teacher is a class teacher.
>> My favorite teacher is my classroom teacher.
Because,she have a lot of laugh like as me.
>> Because she laughs a lot just like me.
And ,she give us to many exciting activity like cooking, birthday party.
>> And, she gives us many exciting activities like cooking and birthday party activities.
So, I like a class teacher so much.
>> So, I like my classroom teacher so much.
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