Homework

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Great evening! ^^

Thank you for sharing your opinions on this. 

This is a great practice for your writing skills. 

Make sure to be aware of the corrections I\'m giving you in 

terms of writing. 

Teacher Glenda 

Hi how are you? i feel that time goes very fast these days 

>> Correct
 And i think even a miunte or second is precious to lose

>> Correct
 So i study english to not waste time like watching the youtube ,reading an article and listening to music haha 

>>  So I will study English not to waste time like watching the YouTube, reading an article and listening to music haha 



 Old people always say \" a pain is a blessing to youth \" 

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 I don`t agree what they said cuz if it hurts, you have to go see a docter

>> I don\'t agree with what they say because if it hurts (physically), you have to see a doctor.
 This means that most young koreans use to say 

>> This is what most Korean use to say.
 Back to the question , If it will do you good to listen , listen to what they said . but if it`s bad to listen , don`t listen to what they said 

>> Back to the question, If it will do you good to listen then listen to what they say, But if it won\'t do you any good then don\'t listen.

Therefore after all this is a decision that you must make for youtself

>> After all this, it is a decision that you must make for yourself