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2017-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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If I have a chance to change my hometown, I want to make more libraries. I think that book is the best gift not only for children but also for all the people. because we can directly learn knowledge and make our own's dream from reading. when we suffer from troubles for living, we can get a comfort and solution in the book. as i do others will think so too.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]gi!


Thank you for answering last Friday\'s composition topic.


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==


If I have a chance to change my hometown, I want to make more libraries.
 I think that book is the best gift not only for children but also for all the people.
 because we can directly learn knowledge and make our own\'s dream from reading.
 when we suffer from troubles for living, we can get a comfort and solution in the book. as i do others will think so too.

>> If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be to add more libraries because I believe that books are the best kind of gift that we can give to people. Books are important in my opinion because, through reading, we can increase our knowledge and be inspired to dream. Additionally, if we are facing challenges or difficulties, reading certain books can give comfort or advice.

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