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2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing: If you were the leader of your school, what changes would you make? If I were the leader of my school, I would make some changes. First, I would make students behave politely. Second, I would make students take care of plants, flowers, and trees in school's garden. Have a good night~!!^^ See you on thursday.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!^^

Happy Wednesday!

 You did a good job here.

Thank you so much for answering your homework.^^

I will talk to you again tomorrow.

You take care. Enjoy the rest of the day!^^

 

_T. Mayleen :)

 

If I were the leader of my school, I would make some changes.

>> CORRECT!

First, I would make students behave politely.

>> CORRECT!

Second, I would make students take care of plants, flowers, and trees in school\'s garden.

>> Second, I would make students take care of plants, flowers, and trees in our school garden.
Have a good night~!!^^

>> CORRECT!

 See you on thursday.

>> See you on Thursday.

THURSDAY IS A PROPER NOUN SO CAPITALIZE THE FIRST LETTER.

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