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2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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1. Million's of dollars' worth has been caused by a storm which swept across the north of the United States. 2. The River Reiner burst its banks after a heavy rain. 3. Many people were rescued from the floods by fire-fighters. 4. Firefighters received hundreds of calls for help. 5. Wind speeds reached ninety miles per hour at some places. 6. Roads were blocked by fallen trees. 7. Electricity lines were brought down, leaving thousands of homes without electricity. 8. "Everything possible is being done to get things back to normal." a spokesman said. 9. One young girl was taken to hospital because she broke her leg. 10. She has now been sent home.

강사 첨삭

I hope you are doing great there [이름]! I bet it\'s already very hot there so use an umbrella to protect yourself from the sun. Take care!   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   1. Million\'s of dollars\' worth has been caused by a storm which swept across the north of the United States. >>> Correct!2. The River Reiner burst its banks after a heavy rain. >>> Correct!3. Many people were rescued from the floods by fire-fighters. >>> Correct!4. Firefighters received hundreds of calls for help. >>> Correct!5. Wind speeds reached ninety miles per hour at some places. >>> Correct!6. Roads were blocked by fallen trees. >>> Correct!7. Electricity lines were brought down, leaving thousands of homes without electricity. >>> Correct!8. \"Everything possible is being done to get things back to normal.\" a spokesman said. >>> Correct!9. One young girl was taken to hospital because she broke her leg. >>> Correct!10. She has now been sent home. >>> Correct!

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