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2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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What are the things that you put on a pedestal? State your reasons. ==> In my case, I respect my old boss when I worked in the LED lighting development. He is very smart and he has a good leadership. Also he cares his team members very kindly. When he needs to decide something, he listened our opinions, after that he decides something very reasonably. If he has a problem when he works, he shares it with us, and he tries to solves that problem by himself. He shares that he knows some information about the company. I think he is very honesty and he really likes his team members like a family. Because of that, I put my boss on a pedestal.

강사 첨삭

That\'s really sweet of you, James! Thanks for sharing. I bet your previous boss also put you on a pedestal because you are such a diligent worker. I feel so inspired. Once again, thank you! I just want you to take a second look at the recommendations below. May they help you make better sentences. Way to go! -Klein- What are the things that you put on a pedestal? State your reasons.==>In my case, I respect my old boss when I worked in the LED lighting development.>>In my case, I respect my old boss in LED lighting development where I worked before. He is very smart and he has a good leadership. >>He is very smart and has good leadership.Also he cares his team members very kindly.>>Also, he cares about his team members. >>Also, he treats his team members very kindly. When he needs to decide something, he listened our opinions, after that he decides something very reasonably.>>When he needs to decide on something, he listens to our opinions, then he decides on something very reasonably. If he has a problem when he works, he shares it with us, and he tries to solves that problem by himself.>>If he has a problem when he works, he shares it with us and tries to solve that by himself. He shares that he knows some information about the company.>>He shared the information he knows about the company. I think he is very honesty and he really likes his team members like a family.>>I think he is very honest and he really likes his team members like a family. Because of that, I put my boss on a pedestal. >>Correct!

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