Homework

2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Recently, I forgot to pay utility bills. 2. I hope to get higher salary this year. 3. Besides English, I am learning Yoga in the gym. 4. I promised to my friends that I will let her stay my home for months until she find out new house. 5. My family and I agreed my brother-in-law is a good person.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Grace!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I didn\'t know you are doing yoga.

I wish I could learn that too. I\'m not very flexible. Haha.

Please take note of my corrections here.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

1. Recently, I forgot to pay utility bills.

>> Recently, I forgot to pay my utility bills.
2. I hope to get a higher salary this year.

>> CORRECT!
3. Besides English, I am learning Yoga in the gym.

>> CORRECT!
*yoga :)
4. I promised to my friends that I will let her stay my home for months until she find out new house.
>> I promised to my friend that I will let her stay in my house until she finds a new house.

5. My family and I agreed my brother-in-law is a good person.

>> My family and I agreed that my brother-in-law is a good person.

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