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When was the last time you put someone in your place?
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I put my junior colleague in my place last week.
Because he didn't work hard and didn't focus his work.
So I scolded him about his attitude in the office.
I hope that he change his mind, but his attitude for a work does not changed.
I disappointed to him and I worry about that how he can change his mind.
I know that it is very difficult to change their character.
But If some people say he has a problem in order to work in the company,he has to think seriously that what kind of problem does he have.
I don't like that I put someone in my place, but if I don't do it, another hard worker get damage because of him.
So I have to do that kind of actions for our team members.
강사 첨삭
That\'s one big role of yours, James! Thank you for sharing.
I am inspired once more. I really think I needed this.
Thanks a bunch! I think working with you is such a big help. May you inspire more souls in your company!
Two thumbs up, my friend! And oh, I am very slow again. LOL
Catch you on the next board.
-Klein-
When was the last time you put someone in your place?==>I put my junior colleague in my place last week. Because he didn\'t work hard and didn\'t focus his work.>>I put my junior colleague in my place last week, because he didn\'t work hard and focus on his work.
So I scolded him about his attitude in the office.>>So I scolded at him about his attitude in the office.
I hope that he change his mind, but his attitude for a work does not changed.>>I hope that he changes his mind, but his attitude for work has not changed.
I disappointed to him and I worry about that how he can change his mind.>>I disappointed him and worry about how he can change his mind.
I know that it is very difficult to change their character.>>Correct
But If some people say he has a problem in order to work in the company,he has to think seriously that what kind of problem does he have.>>But if some people say they have a problem in order to work in the company, they have to think seriously of what kind of problem they have.I don\'t like that I put someone in my place, but if I don\'t do it, another hard worker get damage because of him.>>I don\'t like putting someone in my place, but if I don\'t do it, another hard worker may get damaged because of him.
So I have to do that kind of actions for our team members.
>>So, I have to do that kind of action for our team members.
>>So, I have to do those kinds of action for our team members.
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