homework

Dear [이름],

A WONDERFUL Wednesday to you! ^.^

To start, let me thank you for making your homework.

I appreciate your effort.

I also appreciate how well you made your sentences.

They are better than before.

However, there are still some things you need to consider.

Please check your sentences again.

See the suggestions below.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Party

1. I ate a cheese cake on my last birthday party,.

>> I ate a cheese cake on my last birthday party.

Comma (,) and period (.) can\'t be used consequently.

2. I often go to my friends\' parties, because they are fun.

>> CORRECT!

3. I feel exited when I go to the snack party.
>> I feel excited when I go to a snack party.

You can\'t use THE before SNACK PARTY, because your sentence is a general statement.
 

Monday

1. I go to my computer class on mondays.It is fun!

>> I go to my computer class on Mondays. It is fun!

>> OR: I go to my computer class every Monday. It is fun!

The M in MONDAY should be big.

There should be a space after a period (.).

2. I don\'t like mondays, its so tiering.

>> I don\'t like Mondays, it\'s so tiring.

The M in MONDAY should be big.

SPELLING: It should be TIRING not TIERING.

3. I have 3 academies on mondays.

>> I go to 3 academies on Mondays.

HAVE means you OWN something.

The M in MONDAY should be big.