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Sir [이름]^^
Sometimes I have held onto something just because of their emotional value, ha! ha!
Although I know it would just be gathering dirt, I keep it!
However, I discovered that the number of repair shops is decreasing, which clearly means that people are into new things, and we tend to discard stuff immediately.
See you tomorrow!
When I was a child, I used to see my mother stitch my socks under a dim kerosene lamp.
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However, nowadays those looks could be found just in aged photos.
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My father had put on his shoes for more than 10 years, with them repaired several times.
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Why do we prefer to throw damaged or used things away?
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To begin with, it\'s because our income has been increased and many goods\' prices have become inexpensive compared to the past.
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Tons of cheap and quality products are pouring in, so we can get things very easily.
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Secondly, it\'s because most people are too busy to repair and use them again.
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We tend to think that it would be better off earning more instead of repairing and reusing something.
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Lastly, it\'s because we tend to follow some social preposterous trend which takes products for granted or lightly.
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Most people prefer to possess brand-new ones rather than used ones.
>>Most people prefer to possess brand new ones rather than used ones.
On top of that, our society has been regarding consumption as a virtue.
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That is why I welcome that dozens of thrift shops have recently appeared in my hometown.
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