homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Are there any hobbies you would like to try?
First, I want to try snowcling with my freind.
I can see many fishes and clear water.
Second, I want to try make cookies for alone.
Because,I like to cook something.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
WOW! It is great that even if you are still young, you already want to learn how bake. Anyway, you should try snow cycling with your friend in winter.
Have fun!
~t. Kelly^^
Are there any hobbies you would like to try?
First, I want to try snowcling with my freind.
>> First, I want to try snow cycling with my friend.
I can see many fishes and clear water.
>> I can see many fish and clear water.
Second, I want to try make cookies for alone.
>> Secondly, I want to try make cookies alone.
Because, I like to cook something.
>> Correct.
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