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I agree with the things you mentioned.
Also it\'s uncomfortably hot in summer that you\'d crave for cool refreshments.
Cold drinks make people fat. :) See you later in class.
_T. Mayleen :)
1. What things about summer do you like most and least?
-> I like swimming in summer. Swimming is fun.
>> CORRECT!
-> I like eating watermelons in summer.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because watermelons are sweet and cool and we can eat watermelons only in summer.
>> It\'s because watermelons are sweet, cool, and abundant in summer.
-> I like summer vacation. It\'s because I can take a trip and play all day.
>> CORRECT!
OR: I can go on a trip and play all day.
-> I dislike strong sunlight. It\'s because it makes me hot.
>> I dislike the strong sunlight because it makes me feel hot.
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