Homework

2017-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I do not have any sisters. 2. My friend’s sister is 9 years old. She is cute. 3. I could’t play basketball. I was sick. 4. He is sick now. Be careful with him. 5. I have an apple, a banana and an orange. They are healthy fruits. 6. Our lunch is fruits. You should eat all of them. Hello ,,Paula^^ I have something to tell you. I have to go to swimming class tomorrow evening. Because I missed the regular swimming class last time. So my mom will change the class time only for tomorrow. I don’t know what time it is yet. I want to have a class with you. But my mom said you are full of classes other times. I guess I will see you on next Monday...... Have a good weekend !

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A TERRIFIC Thursday to you! ^.^


First of all, thank you for informing me about an important appointment you will have tomorrow! ^^

I also hope to still have a class with you tomorrow, so I won\'t miss you too much.


Anyway, I envy you, because you will have your swimming class.

I also want to learn how to swim, but I don\'t have time for it, and my body doesn\'t have a lot of energy nowadays, so I can\'t really do a lot of activities.


By the way, you need a round of applause because of your homework.

You amazingly did your homework.

Good job and keep it up! ^^

However, you forgot to make two sentences for WAIT.

Well, as a whole, you did really great! ^^.


That\'s all for today! ^^

See you! ^^,


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



1. I do not have any sisters.

>> CORRECT!

2. My friend’s sister is 9 years old. She is cute.

>> CORRECT!

3. I could’t play basketball. I was sick.

>> I couldn\'t play basketball. I was sick.

4. He is sick now. Be careful with him.

>> CORRECT!

5. I have an apple, a banana and an orange. They are healthy fruits.

>> CORRECT!

6. Our lunch is fruits. You should eat all of them.

>> CORRECT!


Hello ,,Paula^^

>> Hello, Paula! ^^

>> OR: Hello, Paula. ^^

I have something to tell you.

>> CORRECT!

I have to go to swimming class tomorrow evening. Because I missed the regular swimming class last time.

>> I have to go to me swimming class tomorrow evening, because I missed the regular swimming class last time.

>> OR: I have to go to me swimming class tomorrow evening, because I missed one regular swimming class last time.

So my mom will change the class time only for tomorrow.

>> Therefore, my mom will change the class time tomorrow.

I don’t know what time it is yet. I want to have a class with you.

>> I don\'t know yet what time it will be. I want to have a class with you.

But my mom said you are full of classes other times.

>> However, my mom said you already have other classes on other times.

I guess I will see you on next Monday......

>> I guess I will see you on Monday.

>> OR: I guess I will see you on Monday...

Have a good weekend !

>> Have a good weekend!

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