Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A TERRIFIC Thursday to you! ^.^
First of all, thank you for informing me about an important appointment you will have tomorrow! ^^
I also hope to still have a class with you tomorrow, so I won\'t miss you too much.
Anyway, I envy you, because you will have your swimming class.
I also want to learn how to swim, but I don\'t have time for it, and my body doesn\'t have a lot of energy nowadays, so I can\'t really do a lot of activities.
By the way, you need a round of applause because of your homework.
You amazingly did your homework.
Good job and keep it up! ^^
However, you forgot to make two sentences for WAIT.
Well, as a whole, you did really great! ^^.
That\'s all for today! ^^
See you! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
1. I do not have any sisters.
>> CORRECT!
2. My friend’s sister is 9 years old. She is cute.
>> CORRECT!
3. I could’t play basketball. I was sick.
>> I couldn\'t play basketball. I was sick.
4. He is sick now. Be careful with him.
>> CORRECT!
5. I have an apple, a banana and an orange. They are healthy fruits.
>> CORRECT!
6. Our lunch is fruits. You should eat all of them.
>> CORRECT!
Hello ,,Paula^^
>> Hello, Paula! ^^
>> OR: Hello, Paula. ^^
I have something to tell you.
>> CORRECT!
I have to go to swimming class tomorrow evening. Because I missed the regular swimming class last time.
>> I have to go to me swimming class tomorrow evening, because I missed the regular swimming class last time.
>> OR: I have to go to me swimming class tomorrow evening, because I missed one regular swimming class last time.
So my mom will change the class time only for tomorrow.
>> Therefore, my mom will change the class time tomorrow.
I don’t know what time it is yet. I want to have a class with you.
>> I don\'t know yet what time it will be. I want to have a class with you.
But my mom said you are full of classes other times.
>> However, my mom said you already have other classes on other times.
I guess I will see you on next Monday......
>> I guess I will see you on Monday.
>> OR: I guess I will see you on Monday...
Have a good weekend !
>> Have a good weekend!
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