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2017-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi kelly. It's been a month since i started studying. When can I speank English well? I'm in a hurry. If iconstantly study after one years,I can speake english to my think. Are you a fashionable person? Do you think it is important to be in fashion? == I like to wear clother.It become a means to me. My fashion style is basic and classical.so i want seem it The fashion important since tools to express me.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ma\'am Sylvia!

Thank you for doing your homework. Anyway, regarding your English study, I hope that you will not get tired learning. Just be more patient and determine to improve your skill. I know that you can do it because you are diligent. And always remember, I am here to help you.^^

~Kelly^^

Hi kelly.

>> Hi Kelly!
It\'s been a month since i started studying.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> It\'s been a month since I started studying.
When can I speank English well?

>> When can I speak English well?
I\'m in a hurry.

>> Correct.
 If iconstantly study after one years,I can speake english to my think.

>> If I constantly study English, I think, I can speak English well after one year.
 re you a fashionable person? Do you think it is important to be in fashion?
==
I like to wear clother. It become a means to me.

>> Did you mean: I like to dressing up. It became important to me.
 My fashion style is basic and classical. so i want seem it 

>> My fashion style is basic and classic, so I want to maintain it.
The fashion important since tools to express me.

>> Fashion is important for expressing myself.

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