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2017-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1. grandparents 2. present 3. prestigious My prestigious grandparents get award,so I present a messages to celebrate. Dear [Name] I heard the news of the Philippines on the news. I am worried. Are you okay? I hope peace your country.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]!^^

Thank you for your homework and I appreciate your concern about our situation here. Don\'t worry, I am fine, but I also hope that peace will reign again in the entire country. Have a good day!^^

~t. Kelly^^ 

1. grandparents
2. present
3. prestigious
My prestigious grandparents get award,so I present a messages to celebrate.

>> Did you mean: My prestigious grandparents received a present, so, I also gave a message during the celebration.
Dear [Name]

>> Correct.
I heard the news of the Philippines on the news.

>> I heard on the news about the Philippines.
I am worried.

>> Correct.
Are you okay?

>> Correct.
I hope peace your country.

>> I hope for peace in your country.

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