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Oh, what an experience!
Thanks for sharing, James. I think we all have that kind of episode. Do not be too hard on yourself now neither to your junior. He must have been terrified! You are quite scary, my friend.
Relax! I am just teasing you. LOL
Once again, thank you.
I hope that it served you a lesson. It is a good reminder for me, too.
Let us do our best once more this week.
All the best!
-Klein-
When was the last time you put your foot in your mouth?
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In my case, I try not to mistake when I have work.
>>In my case, I try not to make a mistake when I have work.
But nowadays,as you know, I don\'t remember something when I work in the company.
>>Correct
A few weeks ago, I ordered my junior colleague to do something and i had explained how he had to do that work.
>>Correct! (capitalization: I)
He told me that he finished his work, and I checked his work result.
>>Correct
At that time, I forgot that I guided him how to work.
>>Correct
I didn\'t satisfy what he did.
>>I wasn\'t satisfied with what he did.
So I complained about the result of work.
>>Correct
Because he finished the work according to my advice, so he embarrassed very much.
>>Since he finished the work according to my advice, he was so much embarrassed.
I forgot that I guided when he stared the work.
>>I forgot that I guided him when he started the work.
He said to me very carefully that I guided that work.
>>Correct
I remembered that I explained when I ordered him to work.
>>I remembered that I explained it when I ordered him to work.
The result was the output what I explained.
>>The result was the output I explained.
I have to angry to me because I did not guide exactly.
>>I have to be angry with myself because I did not guide him exactly.
It was that I put my foot in my mouth.
>>It was when I put my foot in my mouth.
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