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2017-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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where do you want to put your fingers on today? ==> Today, I want to go the temple in Pal-gong mountain in Daegu. The name of temple is Kwan-am temple. When my son studied hard after graduated high school for entering university, my wife and I visited the temple once a month. We prayed that my son will enter an university what he wants in the temple. As a result of our praying and his effort, he entered an university what he wants. I hope to go there but my wife has a regular check-up in the hospital. After regular check-up, we don't have enough time to go the temple because my daughter will come back home from the school. So We had a coffee in the coffee shop and came back home early. I took a rest all day.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing! I hope you\'ll find time to go there with your family soon.

Cheer up! And I do think that your son truly deserves to be in that school. Is he doing his best?

He is focusing on his studies and at the same time, he is chilling, which is simply awesome. Too much pressure can harm us, so you too, please relax.

I hope to go to that temple, too, someday.

Let\'s hope for the best!

Enjoy your time, James!

-Klein-

where do you want to put your fingers on today?
 ==>
Today, I want to go the temple in Pal-gong mountain in Daegu.
>>Today, I want to go to the temple in Pal-gong mountain in Daegu.

The name of temple is Kwan-am temple.

>>The name of the temple is Kwan-am temple.
When my son studied hard after graduated high school for entering university, my wife and I visited the temple once a month.

>>When my son studied hard after graduating from high school to enter a university, my wife and I visited the temple once a month.
We prayed that my son will enter an university what he wants in the temple.

>>We prayed that my son would enter the university that he wanted in the temple.
As a result of our praying and his effort, he entered an university what he wants.
>>As a result of our prayers and his efforts, he entered the university he wanted.
I hope to go there but my wife has a regular check-up in the hospital.

>>I hoped to go there but my wife has a regular check-up in the hospital.
After regular check-up, we don\'t have enough time to go the temple because my daughter will come back home from the school.

>>After her regular check-up, we didn\'t have enough time to go to the temple because my daughter would come back home from school.
So We had a coffee in the coffee shop and came back home early.

>>So, we had coffee in a coffee shop and back home early.
 I took a rest all day.

>>Correct

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