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Essay: What is your favorite season?
My favorite season is winter.
Because,I like snow.
In winter, I can ride snow board,and make snowman,snowfight with my friends.
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Essay: What is your favorite season?
My favorite season is winter. Because,I like snow.
>> My favorite season is winter because I like snow.
In winter, I can ride snow board,and make snowman,snowfight with my friends.
>> In winter, I can go snowboarding, make a snowman, snow fight with my friends.
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