homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to free and money.
Because,i think the free is time.
If time is,I can do work that I like.
the money need to help poor person.and the person who i like eat meal.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!^^
Thank you for sharing the things you want. I hope you can have more money and freedom to do everything that you want.^^
Enjoy life to the fullest!
~Kelly^^
I want to free and money.
>> I want freedom and money.
Because,i think the free is time.
>> Because I think time is free.
If time is,I can do work that I like.
>> If I have time, I can do the job that I like.
the money need to help poor person.and the person who i like eat meal.
>> We need money to help poor people. I am a person who likes eating.
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