Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Grace!
Thanks for doing another homework.
Like you, I would also love to live in the past for a week.
Specifically, I would love to go back to the time when my grandmother was still alive.
I want to spend another week with her. :)
What would you change if you could live in the past for a week?
Check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
I would like to live in the past and live another way.
>> CORRECT!
OR:
>> I would like to live in the past and live my life differently.
Then I want to see how the results would be different.
>> CORRECT!
OR:
>> Then, I would like to see how it would affect my future. - better
Like the movie \' About Time\', it will be really exciting if i can return back to the past and could try to live different way the life.
>> Like in the movie, \"About Time\", it would be really exciting if I can return to the past and try to live my life differently.
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