Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Grace!
Good job in this homework!
That\'s an interesting answer.
I\'m also curious what she\'s doing nowadays since she\'s already \"retired\" - at such a young age!
It\'s a bit strange. Haha.
Please check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
I actually have anyone from history that I want to have dinner.
>> I actually don\'t have anyone from history who I want to have dinner with.
OR:
>> I actually can\'t think of anyone from history who I want to have dinner with.
Instead, I want to meet Kim Yuna, who is a figure skater in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
I respect her and I wonder how when spend time after quitting her stake.
>> I respect her and I\'m wondering how she spends her time after she quit figure skating.
Sometimes I can see her in a TV commercial advertising.
>> Sometimes I see her in some TV commercials and ads.
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