Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
5.26 What is the nicest thing someone has ever done for you?
I am so lucky because many people poped in my mind when I am
asked. Recent nice thing that I have was on the was to the repair
shop. I was on the was to the shop to repair mu printer I was so tired to carry it so I wanted to go home quickly. I was in a hurry so I could not see a hump. I crushed the hump so my car was
broken. I went to the car repair shop. The machenic asked me to pay $120 for repairing. It was so expensive. I went to another shop. One guy appraoched me then said hello to me. because I went to that shop before. He remembered me then he fixed my car for free. I should bring him some coffee one day..heh thanks for repairing the car!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Miss [이름]!
You were lucky that day! You saved $120 dollars. Haha!
Anyway, maybe the damage of your car didn\'t require changing of parts so he was able to fix it for free.
You should really buy him a cup of coffee one day. I hope more good things will happen to you..
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
5.26 What is the nicest thing someone has ever done for you?I am so lucky because many people poped in my mind when I amasked.
>>> I am so lucky because many people pop in my mind when I am asked.
Recent nice thing that I have was on the was to the repairshop.
>>> The most recent good thing that happened to me was when I was on my way to the repair shop.
I was on the was to the shop to repair mu printer I was so tired to carry it so I wanted to go home quickly.
>>> I was on my way to the shop to have my printer repaired. I was so tired to carry it and I wanted to go home quickly.
I was in a hurry so I could not see a hump.
>>> Correct!
I crushed the hump so my car wasbroken.
>>> OR: I hit the hump so my car was broken.
I went to the car repair shop.
>>> Correct!
The machenic asked me to pay $120 for repairing.
>>> The mechanic asked me to pay $120 for the repair.
It was so expensive.
>>> Correct!
I went to another shop.
>>> Correct!
One guy appraoched me then said hello to me. because I went to that shop before.
>>> One guy approached and said hello to me. He recognized me because I went to that shop before.
He remembered me then he fixed my car for free.
>>> Because of that he fixed my car for free.
I should bring him some coffee one day..heh thanks for repairing the car!
>>> OR: I should buy him coffee one day. I want to thank him for repairing the car!
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