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2017-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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5.26 What is the nicest thing someone has ever done for you? I am so lucky because many people poped in my mind when I am asked. Recent nice thing that I have was on the was to the repair shop. I was on the was to the shop to repair mu printer I was so tired to carry it so I wanted to go home quickly. I was in a hurry so I could not see a hump. I crushed the hump so my car was broken. I went to the car repair shop. The machenic asked me to pay $120 for repairing. It was so expensive. I went to another shop. One guy appraoched me then said hello to me. because I went to that shop before. He remembered me then he fixed my car for free. I should bring him some coffee one day..heh thanks for repairing the car!

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Good morning Miss [이름]! You were lucky that day! You saved $120 dollars. Haha! Anyway, maybe the damage of your car didn\'t require changing of parts so he was able to fix it for free. You should really buy him a cup of coffee one day. I hope more good things will happen  to you.. See you later!   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   5.26 What is the nicest thing someone has ever done for you?I am so lucky because many people poped in my mind when I amasked. >>> I am so lucky because many people pop in my mind when I am asked. Recent nice thing that I have was on the was to the repairshop. >>> The most recent good thing that happened to me was when I was on my way to the repair shop. I was on the was to the shop to repair mu printer I was so tired to carry it so I wanted to go home quickly. >>> I was on my way to the shop to have my printer repaired. I was so tired to carry it and I wanted to go home quickly. I was in a hurry so I could not see a hump. >>> Correct! I crushed the hump so my car wasbroken. >>> OR: I hit the hump so my car was broken. I went to the car repair shop. >>> Correct! The machenic asked me to pay $120 for repairing. >>> The mechanic asked me to pay $120 for the repair. It was so expensive. >>> Correct! I went to another shop. >>> Correct! One guy appraoched me then said hello to me. because I went to that shop before. >>> One guy approached and said hello to me. He recognized me because I went to that shop before. He remembered me then he fixed my car for free. >>> Because of that he fixed my car for free. I should bring him some coffee one day..heh thanks for repairing the car! >>> OR: I should buy him coffee one day. I want to thank him for repairing the car!

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