homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. My swimming teacher is good at free style. He can swim 100 meter with free style.
2. I have 3 English teachers. They are mom,school English teacher and Paula teacher.
3. All of my teachers are kind. I love them.
4. I enjoyed basketball.
5. Enjoy your life!
6. He always enjoys in the park.
Good night!^^
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A FRUITFUL Thursday! ^.^
Thank you for doing your homework! ^^
All of the sentences that you made are all good.
However, you need to check some things below, especially numbers 1, 2 and 6.
For number 1, you forgot to put FOR before 100 meters.
In addition, you forgot to write S to the word, METER.
In addition, you forgot to write S to the word, METER.
For number 2, you should put MY before MOM and SCHOOL TEACHER.
You shouldn\'t write PAULA TEACHER.
It should be TEACHER PAULA.
There should be a space before the word, SCHOOL.
For number 6, there should be a space between ! and ^^.
That\'s all for today! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
1. My swimming teacher is good at free style. He can swim 100 meter with free style.
2. I have 3 English teachers. They are mom,school English teacher and Paula teacher.
>> I have 3 English teachers. They are my mom, my school English teacher and Teacher Paula.
3. All of my teachers are kind. I love them.
>> CORRECT!
4. I enjoyed basketball.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I enjoyed playing basketball last month.
5. Enjoy your life!
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Enjoy a wonderful life!
6. He always enjoys in the park.
>> CORRECT!
6. He always enjoys in the park.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: He always enjoys staying in the park.
>> OR: He always enjoys playing in the park.
>> OR: He always enjoys having a picnic in the park.
Good night!^^
Good night!^^
>> Good night! ^^
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