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2017-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When was the last time you put your foot in your mouth? Please relate your experience. I put my foot in my mouth a few years ago in a department store. I was shopping for clothing with my boyfriend in the department store and we was wandering around some store to look around. And I naturally touched my boyfriend's stomachache but he was mot my boyfriend. The unknown guy looked very embarrassed and I was also very embarrassed at the moment.

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When was the last time you put your foot in your mouth?
Please relate your experience.
I put my foot in my mouth a few years ago in a department store.

>>Correct
 I was shopping for clothing with my boyfriend in the department store and we was wandering around some store to look around.

>>I was shopping for some clothing with my boyfriend in the department store and we were wandering around some store (just to look around).

>>I was shopping for clothes with my boyfriend in the department store and we were looking around some other stores.
 And I naturally touched my boyfriend\'s stomachache but he was mot my boyfriend.
>>And I naturally touched my boyfriend\'s belly (stomach - inside) but he was not my boyfriend.

The unknown guy looked very embarrassed and I was also very embarrassed at the moment.

>>Correct!

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