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When was the last time you put your foot in your mouth?
Please relate your experience.
I put my foot in my mouth a few years ago in a department store.
>>Correct
I was shopping for clothing with my boyfriend in the department store and we was wandering around some store to look around.
>>I was shopping for some clothing with my boyfriend in the department store and we were wandering around some store (just to look around).
>>I was shopping for clothes with my boyfriend in the department store and we were looking around some other stores.
And I naturally touched my boyfriend\'s stomachache but he was mot my boyfriend.
>>And I naturally touched my boyfriend\'s belly (stomach - inside) but he was not my boyfriend.
The unknown guy looked very embarrassed and I was also very embarrassed at the moment.
>>Correct!
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