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2017-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Tell me the 3 best things about you. Explain each of them. My friends said that I have nice shape of legs. Although my legs are not long but the shapes are fine. And I have dimples on my cheeks and my boyfriend really like them. Also my body is flexible because I do yoga regularly.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Grace!

Thanks for doing your homework.

Like you, I don\'t have long legs too and that has always been my frustration.

I want to have long and toned legs! Haha!

I saw your dimples (in your Instagram profile picture) and they\'re so cute!

I envy you! I would love to be flexible and do yoga too. :)

Check my corrections here.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

My friends said that I have nice shape of legs.

>> My friends said that I have nice legs.

OR:
>> My friends said that my legs are nicely shaped.
 Although my legs are not long but the shapes are fine.

>> Although my legs are not long, they have a fine shape.
 And I have dimples on my cheeks and my boyfriend really like them.

>> I also have dimples on my cheeks and my boyfriend really likes them.
 Also my body is flexible because I do yoga regularly.

>> And my body is flexible because I do yoga regularly.

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