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2017-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi how are you?? I feel i`m homesick thesedays you`re right that i must have missed my parents and my friends well actally i want to go back to korea haha But i`ve got six months here before going back to korea So i can stand for 6months i`m gonna be patient 1. Lisa saw the shooting star yesterday. 2. Don't look directly at the sun. 3. Is there any milk left in the fridge? 4. I need to pack an apple for my lunch. 5. The dogs were every given a bone. 6. The police spoke separately to each suspect. 7. She was wearing a bracelet on each wrist. 8. She got her license without any problems. 9. He went with two his younger sisters. 10. I always keep some money in my wallet for emergencies.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Great afternoon! ^^


Don\'t worry, time flies so fast that you won\'t even notice it. :)

Make the most of your stay there in Sydney.

Learn as much as you can. Nothing will be more precious that

your great experiences in that place.

Please go over how I corrected your sentences.


See you! ^^


Teacher Glenda


Hi how are you??
I feel i`m homesick thesedays you`re right that i must have missed my parents and my friends well actally i want to go back to korea haha 

>> I feel homesick these days. You were right that I must have missed my parents and my friends.   Actually, I want to go back to Korea. haha 
 But i`ve got six months here before going back to korea 

>> But I`ve got six more months to stay here before going back to Korea. 
So i can stand for 6months i`m gonna be patient 

>> So I can stand for 6months and I`m gonna be patient. 


 1. Lisa saw a shooting star yesterday.
>> a


2. Don\'t look directly at the sun.
>> Correct

3. Is there any milk left in the fridge?
>>
Correct

4. I need to pack an apple for my lunch.
>> Correct

5. The dogs were each given a bone.
>> each


6. The police spoke separately to each suspect.
>> Correct

7. She was wearing a bracelet on each wrist.
>> Correct

8. She got her license without any problems.
>> Correct

9. He went with both his younger sisters.
>> both his


10. I always keep some money in my wallet for emergencies.

>> Correct

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