homework

Dear [이름],

TGIF~~~!!! ^.^

Thanks a lot for doing your homework! ^^

You are really improving.

I am so proud of you.

Very good! ^^,

However, you still need to check some things.

Please see the suggestions below.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you later! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

1. I can eat 10 pieces of pizza.

>> CORRECT!

2. When we dont eat, we will very hungry.

>> When we don\'t eat, we will be very hungry.

>> OR: When we do not eat, we will be very hungry.

*There should be an APOSTROPHE (\') between N and T of DONT.

*There should be BE after WILL to complete your sentence.

3. Do you need some water?

>> CORRECT!

4. I need 2 glasses of water.

>> CORRECT!

5. You can’t move this, because it\'s heavy.

>> CORRECT!

6. Heavy things are strong.

>> CORRECT!

7. My stomach is so hurt!

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: My stomach hurts a lot!

>> OR: My stomach hurts so much!

8. He is a doctor about stomach.

>> He is a doctor for stomach diseases.

>> OR: He is a doctor specializing in treating stomach diseases.

*ABOUT should be FOR.

9. Hurry up! you can run fast!

>> Hurry up! You can run fast!

*Y of YOU should be in big letter.

10. What a fast car!

>> CORRECT!

See you tomorrow!^^

>> See you tomorrow! ^^

*There should be a SPACE between ! and ^^.