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2017-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Relate any of your experiences where you were put down or you put someone down. ==> Sometimes I am put my junior colleague down when I check the result of the work. I hope that he had to show me his ability in his work, but the output of his work is not acceptable to me. I cannot satisfy his output in his work because the result of his work is poor. I think he doesn't have passion in his work and he cannot focus on his work at working time. For this reason, sometimes I am put him down in front of me.

강사 첨삭

Oh, dear! This is truly degrading.

James, have you tried changing your ways?

I mean, have you tried talking to him in some other ways to improve his work?

One interpretation here is he is losing his passion because you keep on putting him down.

He now feels so incompetent, so he doesn\'t want to try.

Perhaps, you can approach him differently. If it doesn\'t work, then let\'s think about it again later.

Thanks for sharing!

I will catch you on the next board.

-Klein-

Relate any of your experiences where you were put down or you put someone down.
 ==>
 Sometimes I am put my junior colleague down when I check the result of the work.

>>Sometimes I put my junior colleague down when I check the result of the work.
 I hope that he had to show me his ability in his work, but the output of his work is not acceptable to me.

>>I hope that he would show me his ability in his work, but the output is unacceptable.
 I cannot satisfy his output in his work because the result of his work is poor.

>>I cannot be satisfied by his output because it is poor.
 I think he doesn\'t have passion in his work and he cannot focus on his work at working time.

>>Correct

OR >>I think he doesn\'t have passion for his work, so he cannot focus during working time.
 For this reason, sometimes I am put him down in front of me.

>>For this reason, sometimes I put him down in front of me.

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