Homework

2017-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

How would you convince me that you are perspicacious? ==> As you know, I am not perspicacious. So I don't have a confidence if I have to persuade you, and it's very difficult thing to solve it. But I think I am diligent, so I can do something continuously. If I get a target, I can effort to achieve the goal. When the God makes human, maybe they gave an ability equivalently. Someone has a good talent in dance, another person has a good talent in study etc... Although I am not perspicacious, I have an endurance. Maybe it will cover my defect. Anyway, it's TGIF. Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday..

강사 첨삭




You sure showed me another way of looking at things, my friend.

Thank you very much!

I hope that you are more than ready to conquer new challenges in July.

Keep it up!

If you need anything and you think I can help you with it, you know what to do.

Thanks for all your efforts, James.

Until our next chat!

-Klein- 

How would you convince me that you are perspicacious?
 ==>
 As you know, I am not perspicacious.

>>Correct
 So I don\'t have a confidence if I have to persuade you, and it\'s very difficult thing to solve it.

>>So I don\'t have confidence if I have to persuade you and it\'s a very difficult thing to solve.
 But I think I am diligent, so I can do something continuously.

>>Correct
 If I get a target, I can effort to achieve the goal.

>>If I get a target, I can exert effort to achieve it.
 When the God makes human, maybe they gave an ability equivalently.

>>When God made human, maybe he gave an ability equivalent to us.
 Someone has a good talent in dance, another person has a good talent in study etc.

>>Someone has a good talent in dancing; another person has a good talent in studying, etc.
 Although I am not perspicacious, I have an endurance.

>>Although I am not perspicacious, I have endurance.
 Maybe it will cover my defect.

>>Correct
 Anyway, it\'s TGIF.

>>Correct
 Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday.

>>Correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·