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2017-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Let us play soccer. 2. Why don't you play a smart phone game? 3. I have an idea for our contest. 4. That is a really good idea! 5. My friends like me. 6. They are not my friends. Have a great weekends! ^^

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A fantastic Friday to you and your family! ^.^


Perfect! ^^

All of the sentence that you made are correct.

Good job! ^^,


However, be careful in using the work WEEKENDS in your sentence.

Please see the reason why.

Please read all my comments.


That\'s all for today! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

Have a great weekend! ^^.

See you on Monday! ^.^


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



1. Let us play soccer.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Let\'s play soccer.

2. Why don\'t you play a smart phone game?

>> CORRECT!

3. I have an idea for our contest.

>> CORRECT!

4. That is a really good idea!

>> CORRECT!

5. My friends like me.

>> CORRECT!

6. They are not my friends.

>> CORRECT!

Have a great weekends! ^^

>> Have a great weekend! ^.^

*Remove the S in WEEKENDS, because WEEKEND is the period of time between Friday evening and Monday morning. 

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