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2017-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi how are you?? Did you have a great weekend?? I did have a great weekend cuz my girlfriend`s birthday I made some food for her and we did exercise something that helped ours HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: In no less than 5 sentences, answer the following questions. If you can change one thing in the world, what would it be and why? If i can change one thing , i would like to see in the would without poverty there are many people who suffered and not having enough to eat So i want to see in the would poverty every morning when they wake up , I hope that they can eat their next meals without worrying

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Happy first Monday of July ^^

It was good to know that you really did enjoy your weekend. :)

I hope that you will also have a great week! ^^

See you!


Teacher Glenda


 

Hi how are you?? Did you have a great weekend??
I did have a great weekend cuz my girlfriend`s birthday 

>> I did have a great weekend because it was my girlfriend\'s birthday.
 I made some food for her and we did exercise something that helped ours
>> I made some food for her and we did exercise something that helped us.

 HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: In no less than 5 sentences, answer the following questions.
If you can change one thing in the world, what would it be and why?

If i can change one thing , i would like to see in the would without poverty there are many people who suffered and not having enough to eat 

>> If I can change one thing, I would like to see the world without poverty. There are many people who are suffering and not having enough to eat.
 So i want to see in the would poverty every morning when they wake up ,

>> So I want to see that they will not experience poverty when they wake up.
 I hope that they can eat their next meals without worrying.

>> Correct

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