Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Happy first Monday of July ^^
It was good to know that you really did enjoy your weekend. :)
I hope that you will also have a great week! ^^
See you!
Teacher Glenda
Hi how are you?? Did you have a great weekend??
I did have a great weekend cuz my girlfriend`s birthday
>> I did have a great weekend because it was my girlfriend\'s birthday.
I made some food for her and we did exercise something that helped ours
>> I made some food for her and we did exercise something that helped us.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: In no less than 5 sentences, answer the following questions.
If you can change one thing in the world, what would it be and why?
If i can change one thing , i would like to see in the would without poverty there are many people who suffered and not having enough to eat
>> If I can change one thing, I would like to see the world without poverty. There are many people who are suffering and not having enough to eat.
So i want to see in the would poverty every morning when they wake up ,
>> So I want to see that they will not experience poverty when they wake up.
I hope that they can eat their next meals without worrying.
>> Correct
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