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It\'s been said that genius is largely the result of hard work, rather than an inspired flash of insight and I totally agree with this.
See you in class!!
Always.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I agree with Thomas Edison\'s saying \'Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration\'.
>>> I agree with Thomas Edison\'s saying \"Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.\"
I agree with this saying because no matter how smart you are, you can\'t learn anything if you avoid learning.
>>> Correct!
I like to think that \'genius\' is just a way of telling an exceptionally clever person who learned its wisdom by experience or studying.
>>> I like to think that genius just refers to an exceptionally clever person who learned his / her wisdom through experiencing or studying.
I\'ll admit that some people are born with amazing memories and some people are born with an ability to understand someone so well that they don\'t have to say twice.
>>> I\'ll admit that some people were born with amazing memories and some were born with an ability to understand someone so well that they don\'t have to say it twice.
But all of them are no use for you if you avoid searching for the knowledge.
>>> But all of them are no use for you if you avoid searching for knowledge.
When people success for their knowledge, it isn\'t because they\'re born that way, the reasons are because they tried hard enough.
>>> When people succeed in enriching their knowledge, it isn\'t because they\'re born that way. The reason is because they tried hard enough.
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