Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Oh, dear. I can feel your anger, James!
Please take three deep breaths.
Please forgive your son. Did he apologize?
I wish this won\'t happen again. Honestly, I\'ve experienced an almost similar situation.
Worse, I was the one who did not show up.
If you are interested, I will tell you the story. Just say the word.
Cheer up now!
Enjoy this brand new month!
-Klein-
When was the last time you were petulant?
==>
As I said to you in the morning, I was petulant on last Friday because my son didn\'t keep an appointment with us.
>>As I said to you in the morning, I was petulant last Friday because my son didn\'t keep his appointment with us.
We had a plan to meet in the Pohang station at 08:05 PM on Friday.
>>We had a plan to meet in Pohang Station at 8:05 PM on Friday.
So I reserved the KTCX train ticket and send it to him.
>>So I reserved the KTCX
The ticket was expensive but It took short time from Seoul to Pohang.
>>The ticket was expensive but it took us short time from Seoul to Pohang.
I went to the Pohang station with my wife and my daughter by my car from Gumi after work, and we waited him.
>>I went to Pohang Stating with my wife and my daughter by my car from Gumi after work, and we waited for him.
But he didn\'t appear in the Pohang station and he didn\'t give us any information.
>>But he didn\'t appear in Pohang Station, and he didn\'t give us any information about his status.
At first, I worried about what happened to my son but after I knew the reason why he didn\'t come here, I was upset.
>>At first, I worried about what might have happened to my son but after I knew the reason that he didn\'t go there, I was upset.
He couldn\'t get on the train because of sleeping.
>>He couldn\'t get on the train because of sleeping deeply.
I was very disappointed to him because of unbelievable action.
>>I was very disappointed with him because of his unbelievable action.
It was the last time I were bad-tempered.
>>It was the most recent time I was bad/ill-tempered.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.