Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing Exercise: Do you like chocolate?
Why do you think so many people are addicted to chocolate?
Especially I like white chocolate.
We feel happy when we eat sweet chocolate.
So many people are addicted to chocolate because of feeling happy.
Have a good night~!!^^
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Thank you for answering your homework.
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Especially I like white chocolate.
>> I especially like white chocolate
We feel happy when we eat sweet chocolate.
>> Eating chocolate makes us feel happy.
So many people are addicted to chocolate because of feeling happy.
>> So many people are addicted to chocolate because of the happy feeling it gives.
Have a good night~!!^^
>> CORRECT!
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