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Aha! I think I know that story. Thanks for sharing how you felt about it.
You must be relieved that you did not get a very low mark. B is not that bad. What do you think?
I know; you only want A, but deal with it for now. You can always do better next time. At least now you know what to focus on.
I wish you all the best, [이름]!
-Klein-
When was the last time you were petulant?
What exactly happened?
Not long ago, I was so upset because professors blamed my final presentation and architecture model.
>>Correct
I thought I got a bad evaluation in mid-term, so they give me a bad score.
>>I thought I got a bad evaluation in mid-term, so they gave me a bad score.
So I was petulant, as they must be fair when evaluate student.
>>So I was petulant, as they must be fair when evaluating students.
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