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2017-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When was the last time you were petulant? What exactly happened? Not long ago, I was so upset because professors blamed my final presentation and architecture model. I thought I got a bad evaluation in mid-term, so they give me a bad score. So I was petulant, as they must be fair when evaluate student.

강사 첨삭



Aha! I think I know that story. Thanks for sharing how you felt about it.

You must be relieved that you did not get a very low mark. B is not that bad. What do you think?

I know; you only want A, but deal with it for now. You can always do better next time. At least now you know what to focus on.

I wish you all the best, [이름]!

-Klein- 

When was the last time you were petulant?
What exactly happened?
 Not long ago, I was so upset because professors blamed my final presentation and architecture model.

>>Correct

I thought I got a bad evaluation in mid-term, so they give me a bad score.

>>I thought I got a bad evaluation in mid-term, so they gave me a bad score.

So I was petulant, as they must be fair when evaluate student.

>>So I was petulant, as they must be fair when evaluating students.

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