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==Teacher Charlie==
I will support the plan that a new restaurant is built in my neighborhood.
because The more the restaurant in my neighborhood, the more the chance of choice restaurant. it is good for us. beside, if the new restaurant provide neighborhood with cheap and tasty food, this couldn’t be better for us. but if it doesn’t, we just don’t use it.
Another reason is that it may help local economy in growing. if it is more famus , more people would come to my town. it could be make more job then local economy is more boosted. it will also good for us.
So I support the the plan to build a new restaruant.
>> I would support the idea of a new restaurant that may be built in my neighborhood because this would offer more dining choices for us who live in the neighborhood. It would be more beneficial for us if the new restaurant would provide delicious food at a reasonable price.
Aside from that, having a new restaurant might be able to boost the local economy wherein employment would be offered to our neighbors and if the restaurant is well-known, people would stop by our neighborhood and business will boom.
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