Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Relax now, my friend.
Have you eaten?
I hope that you are having a wonderful day.
Let us both try to look on the bright side of things. We can do it!
But you know what, you have a very good point here.
It\'s just that we all have different standards. Thanks for sharing!
Stay safe and sound, James.
-Klein-
What are the things that may raise some eyebrows?
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There are many things that may raise some eyebrows.
>>Correct
Especially, We have to keep the etiquette in the public area like a restaurant.
>>Especially, we have to keep the etiquette in a public area like a restaurant.
Unfortunately, some children with their parents don\'t keep the manner in the restaurant.
>>Correct
They speak loudly and run between tables.
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If their children act like that, their parents have to say their children about the manner in the public place.
>>If their children act like that, their parents have to tell their children the manner in a public place.
But many parents don\'t ask them to keep silent in the public place.
>>Correct
I think it is very important thing that they have to keep the manner in the public place.
>>I think it is a very important thing that they keep the manner in the public place.
Because of rude action in the public place, sometimes I may raise my eyebrows.
>>Correct!
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