HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jack!
Thanks for doing your homework.
I know that you cannot handle your liquor well.
You told me about that before.
I also don\'t enjoy drinking. I only do it occasionally and just with my friends.
Check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
Hello Marie.
>> CORRECT!
How was your today?.
>> How was your day?
I was having a hard time because of full the class today. any way.
>> I was having a hard time because of my full schedule today.
I just think our korean people drinking culture are very serious because of work.
>> I think the drinking culture in Korea is very serious because of the work and the companies.
For the first reason, Many worker suffer from stress from company.
>> First, many workers suffer from stress in their company.
They don\'t know relieving stress. so They drink much alcohol after work.
>> They don\'t know a way to relieve stress so they drink too much alcohol after work.
For the second reasen, This is my case, I was drinking a can of beer after work three time a week.
>> Second, and this is true in my case, they usually drink a can of beer after work. I drank a can of beer three times a week after work.
Like this, Many people doesn\'t think deep about drinking much alcohol, but I am not a drinker.
>> Just like this, many people don\'t think hard about how much alcohol they are drinking. I can say that I am not a good drinker.
I am on the wagone because My girlfriend is hate about drinking alcolhol.
>> I am on the wagon because my girlfriend hates me drinking alcohol.
Many people need hobbies instead of drinking.
>> Most people need to have hobbies instead of drinking.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT!
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