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2017-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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If you could eat only 3 food/dishes for the rest of your life, what would they be? I would eat rice, 'gim'(dried seaweed seasoning with salt) and salad. Everyday I have to have rice so that I can get energy to move. And gim is my favorite food and I am never sick of gim. Salad makes my body healthy so I try to have to eat frequently.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Grace!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I like your choice of food.

I love dried seaweed too! Like you, I never get sick and tired of it. :)

Check my corrections below.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

I would eat rice, \'gim\' (dried seaweed seasoning with salt) and salad.

>> CORRECT!
Everyday I have to have rice so that I can get energy to move.

>> I must have rice every day so that I can have energy to move.
And gim is my favorite food and I am never sick of gim.

>> CORRECT!

OR:
>> Gim is my favorite food so I never get sick of it.
Salad makes my body healthy so I try to have to eat frequently.

>> Salad is a healthy food so I have to try and eat it frequently.

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