Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Grace!
Good job in this homework!
I like the way you think.
I know that it is a serious problem in your country.
I\'m lucky that we don\'t have the same culture here.
Check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
I think bad drinking cultures should be improved.
>> CORRECT!
For example, older people tend to push younger people to drink a lot considering it is a good manner.
>> For example, older people tend to push younger people to drink a lot because it is supposed to be good manners.
Also some people push around people to drink and blame if they do not drink.
>> Also, some people push others to drink and then reproach them if they don\'t.
Because they think people who do not drink ruins the pleasant atmosphere.
>> Because they think people who do not drink ruin the pleasant atmosphere.
Most of all I hope there are many things for people to enjoy the meeting without drinking.
>> Most important of all, I hope that there are other things for people to enjoy when they get together, aside from drinking.
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