homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A wonderful Wednesday to you! ^.^
First of all, I would like to apologize for not continuing having class with you.
I am not that healthy nowadays.
I need to rest and be healthy for my baby.
I think I already told you that I am pregnant, so I am doing this for my baby more.
Honestly, I consider you one of my babies.
I don\'t want to leave you, but I can feel that I am getting weaker and weaker every day at work, so I really need to have plenty of rest.
It is also what my doctor said.
Anyway, I am so grateful to be your teacher.
I always enjoy talking with you and sharing ideas.
I am also proud of you because you have improved.
By the way, please see the corrections and suggestions I put below.
Happy reading! ^^
That\'s all for now! ^^,
See you tomorrow! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear [Name]
>> Dear [Name],
I am so sad to hear that you stopped teaching me.
>> I am so sad to hear that you will stop teaching me.
>> OR: I am so sad to hear that you are going to stop teaching me.
You are a great teacher to me.
>> You are a great teacher for me.
Thank you for being kind and warm.
>> CORRECT!
I really love the class with you.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I really love having the class with you.
Good night, see you tomorrow.
>> Good night and see you tomorrow.
1. Carbot is a cartoon character from the children animation.
>> Carbot is a cartoon character from a children animation.
2. What is your favorite cartoon character on TV?
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Who is your favorite cartoon character on TV?
3. This doll is cute.
>> CORRECR!
4. I like my baby brother. He looks cute.
>> CORRECT!
5. A duck is a farm animal.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Ducks are farm animals.
6. Ducks can swim well.
>> CORRECT!
7. This cartoon is very funny. I laughed a lot.
>> CORRECT!
8. Please tell me the name of that funny movie.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Please tell me the title of that funny movie.
1. Why don’t you listen to your mom? (Is this what your father always tells you?)
>> CORRECT!
2. Please listen carefully or you will miss the bus.
>> CORRECT!
3. My radio is old. I have to get a new one.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: My radio is old. I have to buy a new one.
4. I can hear his song through the radio.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I can hear his song on the radio.
5. Music makes me comfortable.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Music makes me feel comfortable.
6. I love to go to the music concert with my friends.
>> CORRECT!
7. I’m already late for the train. I must go to the station right now.
>> CORRECT!
8. There are many people waiting in station.
>> There are many people waiting in the station. (STATION is the TRAIN.)
>> OR: There are many people waiting at the station. (STATION is the place where you go to ride on the train.)
9. Korea is one of the popular places to travel around.
>> Korea is one of the most popular places to travel around the world. ( I think you didn\'t finish your sentence.)
>> OR: Korea is one of the most popular places to travel.
10. I am popular in my friends.
>> I am popular to my friends. (POPULAR TO + PERSON or PEOPLE)
>> OR: I am popular in Korea. (POPULAR IN + PLACE)
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