homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A fruitful Thursday to you and to your family! ^.^
You got four out of six in your homework today.
Very good! ^^
It should be perfect, but you forgot some things on completing your sentences.
They are already explained below.
For you to improve more, be sure to use ARTICLES and PUNCTUATION MARKS when they are needed.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Good night, too! ^^,
See you tomorrow! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
1. It’s very hot. Do you want some cold drinks?
>> CORRECT!
2. He wants to get some cold drinks from market.
>> He wants to get some cold drinks from the market. (There should be THE before MARKET.)
3. Ice cubes are made of ice.
>> CORRECT!
4. You look very hot. You should ask her for some ice cubes
>> You look very hot. You should ask her for some ice cubes. (Your grammar is correct, but you forgot to put a PERIOD or DOT [.] after CUBES)
5. We will go to the camp when you say “of course”.
>> CORRECT!
6. “Of course, I will go to the camp with you”.
>> CORRECT!
Good night ^^
>> Good night! ^^ (You forgot to place an EXCLAMATION MARK [!] after NIGHT.)
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