Homework

Hi, [이름]!

You have an impressive essay for today and I totally agree to your point-of-view.

Sometimes, limiting people to explore and work on their interests is not a good thing.

This is because people, no matter how patient they can possibly be, also have limitations.

When they reach the end of the line, they either explode or leave.

I\'ve seen companies do such a thing and the result was not a pretty sight.

I guess it is a matter of a \"give and take\" relationship.

The community should also give back as much as we are required to give.

Anyhow, that\'s it for today.

I hope you\'re having a great one. ^^

~Teacher Charry

People\'s willingness to limit their personal interests can be helpful to achieve a community\'s goal in short term period.

>> People\'s willingness to limit their personal interests can be helpful to achieve a community\'s goal in a short termed period.

OR >> People\'s willingness to limit their personal interests can be helpful to achieve a community\'s goal in a short period.

People can sacrifice their own interests and focus on a community\'s interest.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> People have the ability to sacrifice their own interests and focus on a community\'s interest.

However demanding people to limit their own interests can\'t be a long term solution.

>> However, demanding people to limit their own interests can\'t be a long term solution.

For example, Korean government ignored a labor law and allowed employers to pay low wages to employees before.

>> For example, the Korean government ignored the labor law and allowed employers to pay low wages to employees before.

Korean government wanted labor intensive industry to play the main role to earn foreign currency.

>> The Korean government wanted a labor intensive industry to play the main role in earning foreign currency.

In those times, Korean products\' only strength was low price so the government said employees\' sacrifice would be necessary for bigger goals.

>> In those times, the Korean products\' only strength was low price so the government said to the employees\' that sacrificing would be necessary for bigger goals.

Most Koreans agreed with those ideas and they willingly gave up their interests at first.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Majority of the Korean laborers agreed to sacrifice and they willingly gave up their interests at first.

Maybe Korea succeeded to build a country again but exploitation of employees made many social problems.

>> Maybe Korea succeeded in re-building a country again but the exploitation of employees made many social problems.

I think communities should not ask individuals to limit their interests too much because it can\'t be a solution for long term policy.

>> I think communities should not ask individuals to limit their interests too much because it can\'t be a solution for a long term policy.