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2017-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Hello challie. I think that growing up childfen in the city is better than countryside. Because children in the city get high quality education. I sew my cousins who growew up in a countryside. Even though, she is smart when she was a child, But she hard to go institude. Because this enviroment make her lazy. So i plan to grow up my children in rhe city. Thank

강사 첨삭

Hello Logan! ^^

Thank you for answering yesterday\'s composition topic. Your answer is well thought of and I agree with it.

All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==

I think that growing up childfen in the city is better than countryside. Because children in the city get high quality education. I sew my cousins who growew up in a countryside. Even though, she is smart when she was a child, But she hard to go institude. Because this enviroment make her lazy. So i plan to grow up my children in rhe city.

>> I disagree with the statement that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city because if children would grow up in the city, they would have access to quality education. Take for example one of my cousins who grew up in the countryside. Even though she is intelligent, her environment made her lazy to study because it was hard for her to go to academic institutes.

In the future, I plan to raise my children in the city.

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