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2017-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

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ESSAY: In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: What is one thing you've never done but would like to do now? Once i was young , even now i always wanted to travel around would Not alone with someone who i love . Acually i was shy and introverted but now i have confidence that i can do everyting even if i have , i`m worried about the future what i want to be anyway if i get a chance , i would like to travel around would There is a saying : Fake it until you make it right?

강사 첨삭


Hi [이름]g [이름] [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Thank you for sharing me this composition. :)

Oh, I would love to go around the world as well.

I also want to see the beauty of each country and get to

experience their different cultures.

I hope we could at least find time and save enough cash to fulfill

any of this desires. ;D


See you!


Teacher Glenda 


Once i was young , even now i always wanted to travel around would Not alone with someone who i love . 

>> Since I was young, I always want to travel around the world with someone I love.
Acually i was shy and introverted but now i have confidence that i can do everyting even if i have ,

>> I was actually  an introvert person  but now I am confident that I can do everything if I need to.

i`m worried about the future what i want to be anyway if i get a chance , i would like to travel around would 

>>  I am worrying about my future. I worry about what I want but if I have a chance, I would like to travel around the world.
There is a saying : Fake it until you make it right?

>> There is a saying that goes this way: \" Fake it till you make it!\"

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