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Hi [이름]g [이름] [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing me this composition. :)
Oh, I would love to go around the world as well.
I also want to see the beauty of each country and get to
experience their different cultures.
I hope we could at least find time and save enough cash to fulfill
any of this desires. ;D
See you!
Teacher Glenda
Once i was young , even now i always wanted to travel around would Not alone with someone who i love .
>> Since I was young, I always want to travel around the world with someone I love.
Acually i was shy and introverted but now i have confidence that i can do everyting even if i have ,
>> I was actually an introvert person but now I am confident that I can do everything if I need to.
i`m worried about the future what i want to be anyway if i get a chance , i would like to travel around would
>> I am worrying about my future. I worry about what I want but if I have a chance, I would like to travel around the world.
There is a saying : Fake it until you make it right?
>> There is a saying that goes this way: \" Fake it till you make it!\"
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