Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Creative Writing: Answer in not more than five (5) sentences.
How does rain change your feelings? When can rain be dangerous?
When it rains, I feel blue.
Especially I don't have an umbrella, I feel worse.
When it rains heavily, we might have a flood.
A flood is dangerous because it makes houses fall down and people die.
Have a happy weekend~!!^^
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Good evening, [이름]!^-^
You too, have a fun and safe weekend!^^
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
I can\'t wait to talk to you again.
See you on Monday. You take care!
_T. Mayleen :)
When it rains, I feel blue.
>> CORRECT!
OR: I feel sad when it rains.
Especially I don\'t have an umbrella, I feel worse.
>> It feels worse when I don\'t have an umbrella.
When it rains heavily, we might have a flood.
>> If it rains heavily, there might be a flood.
A flood is dangerous because it makes houses fall down and people die.
>> Flood is dangerous because it destroys houses and kills people.
Have a happy weekend~!!^^
>> CORRECT!
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