Homework

Hello there [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework! ^^ You are impressive!

I loved your opinion about this matter.

I think both are important but substance holds more bearing.

While it is true that appearance is important, substance has more bearing especially in the long run.

Appearance is superficial and won\'t sustain a person for a long period of time.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

I think substance is more important than style.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion,  substance is more important than style.

Not only for products but also for people, good substance will play on important role than style eventually.

>> This is not only true for products but also for people. Good substance will play a better role than style eventually.

People might prefer good looking appearance at first.

>> People might prefer a good looking appearance at first.

However if only someone or something has good style but poor substance, other people will find out it soon.

>> However, if a person only has a good style but poor substance, other people will find out about it soon.

For example, when I buy electronics, I consider not only it\'s style but also other things like a length of warranty period.

>> For example, when I buy gadgets, I consider not only it\'s style but also other things like the length of warranty period.

About relationship with other people, it\'s always more easy to maintain the relationship with people who are kind and intelligent than people who are just pretty or handsome.

>> About relationship with other people, it\'s always easier to maintain one with those people who are kind and intelligent rather than people who are just pretty or handsome.

Good style can make a good first impression so it\'s a strong point but still good substance is more important as a core factor.

>> Good style can make a good first impression so it\'s a strong point but good substance is still more important as a core factor.