Homework

Dear [이름],

A FANTASTIC Friday to you and your family! ^.^

Thank you so much for reminding me and wishing me to be happy and healthy always. ^^

I know that you are already happy and healthy, but I want you to be happier and healthier.

Please stay good and obedient to your parents.

Follow your parents all the time.

Don\'t worry!

We will see each other still.

Thanks for everything, too! ^^

By the way, don\'t forget to corrections and suggestions I placed below.

Improve more! ^^

You can do it! ^^,

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you in the future my good, smart and handsome student! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear [Name]

>> Dear [Name], (You forgot to out a COMMA [,] after my name. Kkk!)

Always be happy and healthy!

>> CORRECT!

I want to see your baby someday.

>> CORRECT!

I hope to see you again.

>> CORRECT!

Thank you for everything .....

>> Thank you for everything... (If you want to put many periods or dots after a sentence, there should only be three dots or period.)

Bye Bye ......

>> Bye bye... (If you want to put many periods or dots after a sentence, there should only be three dots or period.)

1. Studying is my duty as a student.

>> CORRECT!

2. My duty is be a good student.

>> CORRECT!

3. I hope to have a dozen cars.

>> CORRECT!

4. There is a dozen pencils in my pencil case.

>> There is a dozen of pencils in my pencil case. (This is a fixed pattern. A DOZEN OF + PLURAL NOUN)

5. This is my ground. Go to your ground!

>> CORRECT!

6. Oh! it is rainy, you cannot go to the play ground.

>> Oh! It is rainy. You cannot go to the playground. (The COMMA [,] after RAINY should be a DOT [.]. In addition, PLAY GROUND is not correct. It should be PLAYGROUND.)

>> OR: Oh! It is rainy, so you cannot go to the playground.

7. I want to be a good dancer.

>> CORRECT!

8. I think dancing is fun but be a dancer is not fun.

>> I think dancing is fun, but be a dancer is not fun. (You forgot to put a COMMA [,] after I THINK DANCING IS FUN.)